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SCRIPT. 

Written by: Oscar Smith.

 

EXT/NIGHT  WIDE LONG SHOT (Establishing) Surroundings  (description needed) 

  

INT/NIGHT - Scene starts at a bar. (what does this bar look like, what shot will this be – think about framing) 

  

Bartender  

Hi how are you today? How can I help? 


Women  

Hello could I get two shots please. 

Bartender goes and gets two shots and starts to speak to the women. 


Bartender  

You on your own here tonight.

 

Women  

Yes it's been a long day.  


GFX – 25 minutes later. 


After a long conversation the woman gets up to leave. The bartender believes the woman has a liking towards him and gets attached. He decides to leave as well to follow the women without her knowing. 

Bartender and woman leave. 

The women realises she is being followed by him she calls her boyfriend and and meets him on the street. The boyfriend then goes up to him. 


Boyfriend  

Why you following my girl. 


Bartender  

I'm not, I-I didn't realise she had a boyfriend.  

 

The boyfriend starts to get annoyed with the bartender and tries to punch him. The bartender reacts and misses the punch then a fight scene happens, between the boyfriend and the bartender. The bartender punches the boyfriend and runs. Then out of nowhere another man comes out of the dark and stops the bartender in his tracks. He starts to shake. As the boyfriend is running up to him, the man then punches him in the face. The boyfriend runs up to him from behind and they both start kicking him. Then the boyfriend pulls out a gun and shoots the bartender. 

Scene ends. 

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